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A massive glass-walled conference room aboard a futuristic spaceship. A woman in a black dress and a towering crab-like humanoid sit at a sleek table. Outside the window, Earth and the Moon hover in the distance, while a mysterious agent leans back in his chair, watching their reaction.

The Monster of Blueberry Falls, Chapter 9

Longevity and Other Stories
A life without end,
stars call from the endless night,
time slips through our hands.
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The smell of popcorn filled the air as they ran through the green space in the middle of the park. People were scattering left and right, police or guards chased them at every angle and for the first time, Janet saw a soldier, dressed in green, carrying a rifle.

Behind him, we’re three or more soldiers and a Humvee. It looked like they were just coming in.

“This way, everyone, we must evacuate.” It was over a speaker, Janet couldn’t pinpoint where it was coming from, but she could see people were being gathered behind a barrier as the military was coming in. 

A drone, small with a camera, was following them, buzzing through the trees, low. It didn’t slow Wen down. He jumped and thrashed through the trees, putting as much distance between them as he could.

Janet held Wen close. She looked back. She saw a tank tearing its way through the park’s front gate, and she held Wen closer around his waist, reaching up to hug him around the chest as best she could without falling off.

The park security was still helping, running to the other side as the military came in, but they were rushing out of the room, and she could see that pretty soon they met the corner.

She yelled into his ear, “that way, get to the tower.”

He jumped into a pond full of koi, and splashed his way through it, then stared down the drone, smacking it with a claw. It splashed into the water, and then they came out the other side as a rocket shot from a tube from one soldier and past them, exploding the front facade of blueberry falls.

It exploded in a giant fireball. The entire entrance caved in, and she could see all those clocks, trying to go off as they were melting, burning, and falling. Then the roof caved in with a kawoosh. Dust and fire flew from the front as the fireball rolled in slow motion, and the front caved in, crashing down.

They jumped, flying out over a fence, and through a garden on his way through to where two older rides here were. They felt exposed, a great roller coaster, a rickety wooden monster called Whiplash Fever, and a tower-style free fall ride that Janet had only ridden once before. It went up a hundred-fifty feet, just a circle of seats that rotated up and gave you a panoramic view of the area. When you were at the top, you could see the ocean. She hated it, and she knew it would be the last, the endgame. They would get cornered there, but there was no place left she could think of, no clever direction, or a place she could think of to hide him anymore. At last, there they went.

He got to the base of the tower and another rocket flew right by them, blasting into the big wooden coaster, sending it up into flames,

“Come on, big guy, just one last to climb.”

“Okay.”

He jumped on the tower and climbed over the seats. Everything was off, and it was dark. Tanks were moving in, and keeping aim, but not shooting yet.

He looked up at the top. Far from water, far from everything. He’d come here from who knew where. His mind was fuzzy. But this woman. He’d do anything. He clamped onto a series of cables on the side of the tower and began the climb, with Janet up on his shoulder, holding on.

He climbed onto the cables, anywhere he could find purchase, and used the side of a steel ladder out here for whoever might ever have to climb this thing.

He made it up past the trees, and could feel the warmth of Janet’s skin on his, and hugged her to him, then went back to climbing. Occasionally a shot would ring out from a soldier, and several of them were using bullhorns calling for them to come down, let the girl go, and turn themselves in. Every time Janet said to keep going, keep going up. Don’t listen to them.

Before long, they passed where they could hear anyone below. It was just the two of them in the wing. First so many feet, they could see the surrounding park, now filled with the US army. She could see her apartment because they climbed and climbed until they could see houses around the park. Drones surrounded them. They all looked like they were just filming, but they also looked, some of them, like they could take a shot. She wasn’t sure why they hadn’t fired a rocket at the base and just taken them down, but she did her best just to concentrate on holding on. It was getting windy enough up here.

Wen swatted a drone getting too close, and it went teetering to the ground and crashed into the vase. They were already so high that it didn’t matter. When it hit the bottom, they couldn’t hear it.

About halfway up, the drone just sucked and backed off and they were alone. He climbed and climbed, taking her to the top, knowing when they got to the top, it was as far as they could go. Options were rapidly decreasing, and they were both higher than either of them could fall and survive. He trudged, carrying Janet, his love, until they made it to the top.

It was larger up there than either of them suspected. The top had a nice flat fade to stand on, even with a railing. It wasn’t completely secure, but it was better than being on the side. He climbed over the railing and he and Janet rolled onto their faces and caught their breath.

“This is it,” said Wen.

“I know.”

“You could have given me up down there and gotten away.”

“I’m sorry.”

“Why?”

“Because I wanted every moment, I could have with you.”

“I love you.”

She kissed him on the top of that tower and held him and his clawed hands close as the sound of the helicopters arrived. They could hear the soft thump of the rotors.

They stood together, knowing it was their last moment, and waiting for the end, that blast from one of these black helicopters when one of them approached close and extend a ladder, and a short man no taller than four feet, with a thick brown beard, and a dark suit on, wearing thick reddish black goggles dropped to the roof.

“Miss Janet?” He offered a hand. He was smiling, and it seemed genuine, so she took it. He waved to Wen. “You are kind of hard to catch, my friend. Thanks, Barton,” said Wen.

“You know him?”

Wen shrugged. “We’ve met. Barton isn’t here to help us, you know. Yes, nice, but he means business.”

“I’m afraid it’s true. There’s nowhere to go. I can get you off this tower without you crashing to your death, and I can get you out of here alive if you just let me take you.”

“What will happen to us?”

“Well, big guy, you know where I have to take you.”

“Bacon?”

“Yeah.”

“And Janet?”

“That depends on her. If you both go quietly, we’ll do a debriefing with her and see where it goes from there.”

“Can I visit him?”

“At Bacon? You want to just go with him?”

“What’s Bacon? A breakfast nook? Probably not right?”

“It’s kind of…”

“Space prison,” said Wen.

“That’s putting it a little bluntly. It is more like a place he can be himself without having to hide.”

“Where no one else can see him, right?”

“He’d disappear, yeah.”

The wind picked up. The helicopters were getting a little close. Janet’s dress was flying all around her.

She hugged her crab man and kissed him again.

“Or we could just blow up the tower with y’all on it.”

“Shut up.”

“Take us up,” said Wen. “I’ll go, just don’t hurt her.”

“Good idea. Let’s get off this tower then, right?”

He smiled and waved to the helicopter ladder hanging by them. You first, m’lady, then the big guy. I’ll be right behind you.

They climbed the ladder, which seemed even less stable than any of their previous climb. It was rubbery, yet strong, and it held its weight fine, but the view with nothing around them wasn’t comforting. The noise of the helicopter made talking nearly impossible.

When Janet reached the top, Barton held out a hand to help her in.

“But, you were…” she looked down. He wasn’t behind them.

“Sorry,” he said. “I can do that.”

He took a bulky headset with a thick blue foam microphone and showed them a seat where she could sit and strap in.

Then, as Wen clambered into the helicopter, again, Barton helped him in and showed him to a seat next to Janet.

Then the helicopters turned to leave, and in the lead of them all, she watched out the open door, his claw in her hand as her town went by under them. She saw her apartment go by again, the store she liked, a shopping center, and a swimming pool. There were quite a lot of swimming pools. They crossed out over the ocean and turned. Going low, she assumed they were heading for a base or something.

She watched people on the beach, tons of swimmers in the water, dark shadows, and sharks. There were more sharks than people, but they seemed not to notice each other down there.

The strip of hotels and sunbathers fell away and became homes, big expensive mansions on the ocean, and more pools, and then she realized that instead of getting lower they were getting higher.

“Where are we going?”

“Up.”

“You’re such a dork.”

“Why Thank you.” He smiled at her. “Not long now.”

We looked out the window at the sea, then the doors opened in front of them in the sky. A doorway, long and wide, easily large enough to land all these helicopters in, opened wide out of nowhere.

They set down, and the rotors came to a halt above them as the others came in and landed nearby.

She went to the edge, with Barton close behind. “What is this?”

“A ship.”

“What kind? This is crazy.”

“You’re in love with an eight-foot-tall crab man.”

“I see your point.”

“Come on, they’ll close the doors in a second.”

Lights blinked on the left and right sides of the bay doors. Sir, she stepped back, and they closed her in.

“Come on, this way.”

She followed Barton and found Wen’s arm again.

“Up here.”

They followed him into a glass elevator and rode up a couple of floors to a conference room made of glass. They could see the bay full of helicopters, and other things she wasn’t sure of, and on the other side, the open sea. There was a large triangular emblem on the floor made of a slowly spiraling inward series of triangles. The tables were made of glass, and there was a wide range of chairs around.

“I’m in a flying invisible aircraft carrier. This is stupid like I’m in some kind of movie.”

“It’s not an aircraft carrier,” said Barton. He dropped into a chair by the big table, as did Wen. She couldn’t tear herself away from the window.

Wen and Barton exchanged a look, then they watched Janet as the sea quickly vanished in a single whoosh. You could barely feel the ship moving, but a second’s worth of blur later and they were looking at the earth. The moon was off to the right.

“What the actual hell?”

An amusement park at dusk, neon lights reflecting off wet pavement. A towering crab-like humanoid carries a woman in a sleek black dress and turquoise heels. They leap from a rooftop, silhouetted against the twilight sky, while below, stunned officers and cheering spectators watch in awe.

The Monster of Blueberry Falls, Chapter 8

Longevity and Other Stories
A life without end,
stars call from the endless night,
time slips through our hands.
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This is a draft version of a chapter from John Saye’s book, Longevity and Other Stories. If you are daring, why not subscribe to my newsletter (they come few and far between), and I’ll send you a PDF copy of the book?

The police filled the theater. Well, fifteen did, including the mustache man, who seemed in charge. They walked through the back of the theater in the dark, searching for an eight-foot crab man and his tour guide girlfriend, who seemed to have lost her shoes in the last little while, as if they could just blend in with everyone else.

The rest of the cops, and there were a few, stayed outside to keep anyone else coming in as if this were the only entrance to the building.

They canvas out, and tiptoed the steps up and down the aisles on one side, the audience in the dark save for the few people who couldn’t help from recording video on their phones. All of them had a brief blur of light flashing on their face. The auditorium could hold a couple of hundred folks and be currently about half-full. On the other side, instead, a stage was a great big aquarium wall from edge to edge that looked out forever, even though it looked that way by professionals. In the tank, we’re a variety of fish, including a couple of lumbering, very well-fed sharks, and three mermaids, three ladies, dressed in mermaid costumes, with incredibly long flowing, floating wigs that surrounded every move they made with graceful edges. They were dancing to a song that was being piped into the auditorium and one of them; looked like the one on the left was mouthing the words like she was on Broadway and trying to project her lip-syncing to the very back row, and she did that exceptionally well.

Tubes floated about every three or four feet that bubbled, and though the ladies were incredibly adept at holding their breath, you had to breathe sometimes, and there it was.

As the cops crossed in front of the aquarium wall, their black silhouettes screwing up everyone’s video of the presentation, the mermaids started pulling air from the tubes much more often, to where the lead had to blow a huge bubble in the middle of her big part.

They then started a dance where they turned and flipped, and they flew into the sky, presumably gasping for air as it was Janet and Wen who helped there, up and out of the aquarium.

One of them was hiding in the dressing room.

One of them screamed, and another started giggling. They were backing away, their latex fins flapping when Wen spoke. “Please do not be afraid.”

“What are you, some kind of mascot for Captain Tacos?”

He smirked, which was interesting to watch because it involved lots of difficult muscle movements and his feelers popped up as well.

“No, I’m off the sea. I have a brief memory of wince I came.”

“Did he just say ‘wince?’”

“He did. Darling, you are hot.”

“He’s mine!” said Janet, and she was between them.

“I’m not butting in, but can y’all help us if you’re going to be up there?”

Janet scowled, but helped. They were just sitting there. With those fins on, they couldn’t get up.

“Of course,” said Wen. He picked each of them up, and Janet helped them out of their fins.

“Excuse us, coming through!”

While he, an eight-foot crab monster, Jan stood there, helping Janet get the fins off three beautiful young ladies, four clowns dressed like sea lions, passed through and went face-first into the water.

One of them yelled to the last one, get the shark thing on your way. Then they were gone. The last guy picked up what looked like a crazy harpoon gun before jumping in.

One of them popped up for a second and said, “New act?”

“No?” said, Wen.

Once the mermaid’s fins were hanging up, and they were standing there in bikinis, drying off enough to throw something on, one looked up, then at Janet. “It’s him, isn’t it?”

“Yeah,” said Janet.

“This is the monster of blueberry falls, right?”

“It is.”

Janet hugged him around the waist.

“How long has he been hiding out there?”

“Time? For a little over a year,” said Janet.

“My god. I should scream, but Janet, what are you going to do?”

“Run?”

“You can’t do that forever.”

“I know.”

“This is like a legit space man moment!”

“What?”

“I Jean, this is the thing where you too run like hell, and then eventually while you’re sleeping, the black ops guts get you, and string you up by your toenails and ask you tons of questions you don’t know the answer to, while they race him away and pack him on ice so he can’t hurt anyone.”

“Dizzying,” said Wen. “I wouldn’t hurt anyone.”

“Unless they went after her, right?”

“I suppose?”

“Janet, is he a good kisser?”

“Oh, so good!”

“Then you know it, those guts are probably about three to five minutes before knocking to get in here. Y’all got to get out!”

“What’s the best way?” said, Janet.

“Through the pool.”

“Down there?”

“Sure! It is full of bubblers, so every few feet you can get a gulp of air. Then, towards the back, there’s a rock. From the glass, it doesn’t look that big, but from the inside, it’s huge. There’s a tunnel down there that leads straight back to another tank where they keep fish we are getting ready to let into the big one.”

“Okay, don’t you think I need more than a bubbler or something to breathe? Are they on the other side?”

“Yeah, they go back. I know I’ve snuck boyfriends back there, and we made it fine.”

“More than once,” said another.

“Okay, frequently, all right? Gimmick a break.”

Three knocks sounded on the door.

“In you go,” said one mermaid, and pushed Janet into the pool.

“We peeked at her.”

“Well, I figured you’d be fine. Get in!”

Three more knocks. “We’re coming in police!”

He jumped in after her where Janet was struggling to get down to one tube the bubblers were pouring the air in with. Meanwhile, the mermaids threw off their robes to kiss the incoming cops to see how dedicated they were to their jobs. At least one got a new friend for life.

Wen pulled Janet down to the bubbler and waved at the cheering crowd while Janet got used to it and took a good breath and stopped kicking so much.

Her shirt rode up around her, filling with bubbles. Those trying to do their show were astonished by the crab man busying in on them. Only one of them realized he was a) completely at home under the water in that getup, and b) didn’t need the tubes to breathe anything.

One shark swam by and he caressed its smooth vellum belly as it passed. It came to face for more.

When pointed at the rock at the back.

Janet nodded her head, and he took her by the hand.

They swam, mostly him doing the work, pulling her along, and they entered the cave at the back, but not without waving to their cheering public, who were already blowing up their cellular data plans, uploading everything right away online.

They ducked down into the cave and Janet found something that made her love the girls upstairs in a heartbeat, a bubble tube she could carry with her. They swam down the tunnel, no longer decorated for anyone’s pleasure, and passed several fish who were usually out in the big tank on their way out to the other end, where there was a barrier.

After they floated there, Janet saw the pull and pulled it, opening the sliding door. The swimmers pulled the door behind them as they swam out into the next pool.

Janet looked up and saw about a hundred swirling stingrays. He smiled at her and, pulling her by the hand, swam up into the middle of the swirl. The stingrays reacted to him, scattering as they approached. Janet wondered was the magic was normal, but she was busy running out of air, so she sort of lost interest.

They popped up in the middle of the pool, and she took a huge breath.

“I have never wanted to talk so much in my life!”

“What did you want to say?”

“I do not know. Let’s get out of here.”

They climbed out. She looked fine. Her clothes were dripping.

“Shit, she’s right.”

“What?”

“Where will we go? They’re just going to find us.”

“Look, there’s a couch and a gym bag by the side. See if there’s a change of clothes. I’m sure they won’t mind if we take it.”

“Look like a towel, too.”

She dried herself off. He enjoyed watching her disrobe and toss her wet shirt aside.

Rummaging through the gym bag, she scoffed.

“I can’t believe this!”

“What?”

“There’s only a dress in here, oh, and shoes.”

“Shoes? That’s good, right?”

“High heels?” Naked, with the black dress over her arm, she held the five-inch turquoise heels up to show him. “I can’t run in these!”

“I’ll bet they look great on you.”

She rolled her eyes, and kissed him anyway, then pulled on the dress and screw it, the shoes too.

The mermaid show let out. After a series of other acts, each one a little more disturbing than the last, and no more sightings of the crab man, the doors opened, and everyone filed out. Several folks were milling around talking about the crab man. Several of them were on their way to Captain Tacos, some were talking to the officers. They were showing each other their videos and counting their comments and likes, and giving each other thumbs-ups.

The officers in the dressing area above the tank found themselves joined by the clowns in fins, and after waving goodbye, joined others chasing around and down the hall. They stormed into the back room, just as Janet jumped up to ride Wen out the door. He tore across them, swinging with his great claws, and knocked one man right to the ground, and another man down into the tank. He immediately started screaming and saying “sting rays,” repeatedly.

Wen bounded through an extensive set of double doors, carrying Janet at his side, kicked through, and bounded down the hall. Her hair flew behind her. Her eyes were bright, and she was singing as he trounced one officer after another. This one down, that one in the dirt, up on the wall, hooked on a giant hook by his jacket, down under a table, up through a window. He yelled a lot as he flew through, head first, shoes last, and lots of shattered glass everywhere. They bounded out the back door, slamming it with his claws.

They were a pair. He with his armored exoskeleton and she in her black dress and turquoise pumps. She thought, all I need is some nice shell earrings or something, right? No problem. He jumped across the alley, up on a pole. He hit a corner and broke it off. Then Janet, still holding on, jumped back on the roof of the building behind him, housing all the tanks. He got to his feet.

“Ready?”

“Ready!” he jumped off the roof, and out onto the ride building for the haunted house. He climbed to the roof, with Janet by his side, and everyone in the courtyard cheered. One of them got him on her camera phone again.

“Gotcha.”

“Thank you,” said the man next to her. He took the phone from her hand, without her even knowing it.

She couldn’t see his face, with its disguise, and she could almost concentrate on it. Then he stepped back.

“Where’s my phone?” She turned and lost where he was. She was by herself, looking around as Wen and Janet jumped from the roof of the haunted house and landed right in front of her.

“Hi.”

“Hi back,” said Janet.

“You look nice,”

“Thank you.”

They bounded off down the way.